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[Sodomize-it Soro]

So we dance
Forever circling one another
Each of us guiding the other
We can’t break away

The music sometimes dissolves
But never fades completely
We can never escape
The rhythms of this song

Our bodies intertwined
We move
Act
Think
As one

But though we each
Try to end
This lonely dance
We can’t seem to
Find each other


:I

[Dion]

You're depressing.

I like this poem. As I read it, I could almost visualize what you were trying to portray; and that vividness gives life to your art. Keep it up. :D

[Sodomize-it Soro]

Thanks. :D

I honestly didn't think this poem was as depressing as my other ones, and I think it is (arguably) sort of hopeful, but I guess it just depends on how you interpret it. :I

[Bunny]

Aw I think it is sweet! And I still like your poetry!!! Especially the fact that it doesn't rhyme and yet still sounds poetic!!!!!! An impressive feat according to my perspective (minuet though it may be on all things poetry).