I wrote a bit of it and I kind of want to stop and see what you guys think so far. In the next line I plan on him waking up in the hospital with his dead resting his head on his bed. Then I will start writing the night through his fathers eyes followed by his high school life, girls, puberty etc...
I had a bit trouble writing the accident because I myself haven't experienced it, I could only compare it to movies and such. So I hope I gave great detail about it.
Enjoy.
PS: Pardon the grammar, I did majority of it at 1 am.
https://docs.google....xXvHXc-tWc/edit
Edited by Blade, 08 December 2012 - 02:33 AM.