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#1 Blade

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Posted 08 December 2012 - 02:23 AM

I am having a lot of fun with this, As I write I'm getting a lot of ideas to where I want the story to go. It's about the origin of Alexander Love, a playboy billionaire who witnessed the murder of his mother, he becomes an empty soul who finds himself obsessed with finding out who and why they killed his mother. You see thing's through his eyes and then you see thing's through his fathers.

I wrote a bit of it and I kind of want to stop and see what you guys think so far. In the next line I plan on him waking up in the hospital with his dead resting his head on his bed. Then I will start writing the night through his fathers eyes followed by his high school life, girls, puberty etc...

I had a bit trouble writing the accident because I myself haven't experienced it, I could only compare it to movies and such. So I hope I gave great detail about it.

Enjoy.

PS: Pardon the grammar, I did majority of it at 1 am.

https://docs.google....xXvHXc-tWc/edit

Edited by Blade, 08 December 2012 - 02:33 AM.